Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Understanding great characters
Miami Vice Season one disk one
If you want to know how to introduce your characters start with this disk.  It works for any type of writing but it especially works for  character development in the novel and the screenplay.
Why?
You have to be willing to sacrifice your supporting characters.  I sacrificed a great character in Siolam.  I would have liked to keep him around, but the character had to go to literally  to spur the protagonists onward.
The same thing  happens in Miami Vice the pilot.  We open with Tubbs sitting in a car, parked on the wrong side of the street.  That should have been a warning to those who wanted to car jack him.  (though that term didn’t exist in 1984).
He tells the punks to beat it via a shotgun.  But his real motive is to kill someone so he bribes a waiter to dump expensive champagne on someone we will later learn is Calderone (the late great Miguel Pinero). The audience doesn't know he is a cop, we only see flashbacks of his brother being killed and a drug deal gone bad.

The writer introduces us to his first protagonist, opening credits, and we find ourselves with the  second protagonist, clearly an undercover cop Crockett.  Note the name Croc, he owns a crocodile and they live together on a boat.
In the first scene of the second protagonist, his partner is killed.
The writer then introduces us to the supporting cast, Gina, Trudy and the Lt.
More on this tomorrow.
If you want to see how I did it in Siolam, check it out here.

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