Friday, December 18, 2015


Character creation
Miami Vice Season One Disk 2.
I know most of the actors on Miami Vice are still with us.  God, fate, or fortune.  But one isn’t and he was one of the most brilliant characters created the Nug man, AKA Noggie.
The Nug man died a long time ago, but thanks to the greatness of Miami Vice, the character actors and character driven tele-plays.

In this episode called Cool Running,  we find out that sometime the cops cannot do anything better then ride it out with a  C.I. as Crockett says  in Miami you cannot live without them.
The Nug man was selling anything he just arrived out of prison.  But he discovers that a cell mate Desmond is on the hit list of Miami Vice.  So he plays them to be released, then the cops find out he really does know Desmond and decides to use him.
By Act 2, everything is in place, but we find out nothing is, as it seems in Miami.
Cops compete against each other to determine who has the biggest cojones in South Beach.
This leads to a shooting and the quest to find Desmond.
What can you as a writer learn from watching this episode on demand or DVD?
Well, we find the supporting characters playing a bigger role then the stars.
Saundra Santiago and crew help Crockett and Tubbs to achieve their goals.  But unfortunately, the write has created a smarter antagonist.

How do you that?  Well there are two theories the great Robert McKee’s and mine.  While my theory is not unique for character has always been a factor in any great story.
You cannot try two writer’s tricks, hide something from the audience, which Miami Vice does well as many cop show s do or reveal something via a character, which everyone does.
In Act, one the Nug man is introduced as a slick character, smooth talking like the book Swag by Elmore Leonard.  He will sale anything, which should have given the audience a clue.
When is arrested because of the bumbling of Switek and Zito he has a paper bag over his face.  Clearly, they want to use him as an informant but have not figured out how to do so.
Then the antagonist uses an opportunity to look at a police report having heard Desmond’s name called out.
Now Desmond; like most good antagonists is not shown, we don’t know who he is.
We know he shot two cops and drives a van and that is about it.  We know he shot some dope dealers and almost got Crockett and Tubbs killed by a bulldozer.
When the antagonist does show up in Act three the Nug man has gone from coolness to scared.
The antagonist Desmond has been shown to be a bad man.
The writer has done his job; he has created a direct conflict between the protagonist Crockett who must save the Nug man from the antagonist.

Good luck




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