Insurgent
Well Act 2 was weaker then the first film Divergent. That is something you have to be aware of
when you write a novel do you intend a solo act or a series of books.
If you intend a series, you need to plot out your book, decide if a minor character
you might kill off will make a triumphant return in the second book.
Choices choices.
In Siolam, I really liked a supporting character so much I kept the
character around for three chapters focusing on that character instead of the
protagonist.
But the protagonist must be referred to by the supporting character, sort
of like an introduction. Remember this
is the novel not an American film, where your protagonist is being paid,
millions and the audience wants to see him in almost every scene.
I hope you enjoy Siolam. I did leave
room for a sequel (dependent on sales)
If you like, my characters
try Siolam.
Or any of this.
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