The other day I saw Black Mass, back in the day when I
worked in the legal system in Mass. Mr. B.
was the most noted king pin. Does Johnny
Depp give a great performance?
Well as noted in my book character within the screenplay.
http://www.amazon.com/Character-within-Screenplay-Beginnings-Completion/dp/1453718826
You need to think about a character before you create the
protagonist.
Here there was no protagonist development. The other secondary characters were sucked in.
In my current, book Siolam.
http://www.amazon.com/Siolam-Black-Western-Darrell-Banks/dp/1515299236/ref=sr_1_1?s=books&ie=UTF8&qid=1442695944&sr=1-1&keywords=siolam
The protagonist must learn when to kill and not to kill.
In Black Mass, the protagonist never learns not to kill.
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